tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post2353027974957856825..comments2023-06-24T10:01:28.468-04:00Comments on Unreliable Narrator: Book Review: Severance Package, by Duane SwierczynskiDell Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18108158142730913238noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post-68951862649613175752010-01-15T20:00:41.306-05:002010-01-15T20:00:41.306-05:00Thanks for reading, Mr. Beloin. Glad you liked the...Thanks for reading, Mr. Beloin. Glad you liked the book and review. Careful of that blonde, though.Dell Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18108158142730913238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post-24486887088689753322010-01-15T10:04:06.926-05:002010-01-15T10:04:06.926-05:00Excellent review, excellent book...The Wheelman is...Excellent review, excellent book...The Wheelman is the same kinda ride...and I'll be buying The Blonde a drink...Phil Beloin Jr.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post-24212249970135243522010-01-01T18:28:10.825-05:002010-01-01T18:28:10.825-05:00Love your reviews! I like how this one was snappy ...Love your reviews! I like how this one was snappy the way I imagine the book you reviewed is paced. Keep 'em coming!Liz Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06082326421765682661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post-79526294847355599062010-01-01T17:58:28.086-05:002010-01-01T17:58:28.086-05:00Well, I guess times have changed.Well, I guess times have changed.Dell Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18108158142730913238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post-5344903544184289872010-01-01T14:39:23.007-05:002010-01-01T14:39:23.007-05:00Incorrectly ordered boss and David?
"...when ...Incorrectly ordered boss and David?<br />"...when the boss, David, calls ...".<br />Should be(?)<br />"...when David, the boss, calls ..."<br /><br />Is the world losing its anchors in favor of casualness?<br /><br />"...when my uncle Bill Smith" and<br />"...when Bill Smith, my uncle," are what I was taught five decades ago.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post-26531777880806194162010-01-01T10:57:07.435-05:002010-01-01T10:57:07.435-05:00Thanks Cynthia. You too!Thanks Cynthia. You too!Dell Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18108158142730913238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7653198887726184360.post-57764128649005164612010-01-01T09:28:26.381-05:002010-01-01T09:28:26.381-05:00Wow, the book sounds creepy and fascinating. ;)
Th...Wow, the book sounds creepy and fascinating. ;)<br />Thanks for the review.<br /><br />Good luck with your writing and blogging in 2010!Cynthia Sherrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18288379745961381697noreply@blogger.com